First Bond fanfic....

BO007ND · Jan 13th, 2004, 08:55 AM

This is the first chapter of my very first Bond fic,so be easy on me,lol.

James Bond 007: Jewel Face
Chapter 1: The London Encounter

ENT. Nightclub, London, England

James Bond sits at a table in front of a stage with ten or fifteen dancing girls in Vegas style costumes.

James Bond (to a waitress): One Martini, please
Waitress: Coming right up, Sir!

A few minutes later James starts to take a sip out of his martini when the lights go out…. just seconds later they are illuminated by M-16s firing in every direction.

He quickly pushes over his table and starts firing back with Automatic Uzis that he concealed under his tux.

The thugs drop like flies after a minute or so and the lights turn back on. James sees a thug with a Swiss army knife against a dancers neck going upstairs.

Yet, James doesn’t follow the thug, instead he throws a gas pellet at the stage and dashes outside to the roof were he sees a helicopter parked with its propeller spinning. He places his night vision goggles on and sees a pilot inside. He quickly crashes through the glass door and kills the pilot with his bear hands.

James hides in the back of the copter until the man arrives with the showgirl just minutes later.

After a few seconds there is a rain of gunfire between the two men. The woman screams and heads for the demolished door only to be grabbed by the neck by the thug back into the helicopter.

The thug is killed and Bond and his new Bond Girl meet for the first time.

Women: My God, are you crazy?!?! You could have killed us both!
Bond: If I didn’t, you would have died a lot sooner.
Women: Who are you, anyway?
Bond: The name is Bond…James Bond
Women: What the Hell are you doing here?
Bond: I was here for leisure…but since the ambush, I’m on another mission.
Women: You’re an agent?
Bond: Yes. What is your name?
Women: Jessica Malta, I work for the CIA
.
As they continue to talk, they hear a cell phone ring.
Bond picks it up and puts a small microphone to his mouth, when he talks into the phone his voice is much deeper, like the Pilot’s was.
Bond: Hello?
Voice: This is Jewel Tech speaking, what’s delaying your flight?
As the voice says ‘Jewel Tech’ Bond puts a button on his coat onto the phone, then hangs up.
He opens up the button and it has the street address, country, and city typed on a little screen.
Jessica: Jewel Tech…it rings a bell- Oh my God!
Bond (with normal voice): What?
Jewel Technologies is a computer company, but the CIA thinks that it is also holder of over 2,000 nuclear missiles!

Bond sits in the cockpit and puts a fat orange key in the ignition, starting the copter.

Bond: Then were going to Korea.

Bond says while lifting the copter into the night sky.

**Drax** · Jan 13th, 2004, 07:04 PM

Pretty cool, good start. But a couple things...

Quote:

Originally Posted by BO007ND

James Bond (to a waitress): One Martini, please
Waitress: Coming right up, Sir!

What happened to the "Shaken, Not Stirred." line? I think it is a must in any Bond movie (even though some don't have it)

Quote:

Originally Posted by BO007ND

the CIA thinks that it is also holder of over 2,000 nuclear missiles!

2,000?! That is an awful lot of nukes, even for a sometimes unrealistic Bond movie. I think 2 or 4 would suffice. Or maybe like 50 or so that they have the intention of selling to rogue terrorist groups.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BO007ND

Bond: Then were going to Korea.

Why Korea? Or is that something you are adding later in the story, where Bond knows something already with a Korea/missing nukes connection?

Welcome to the board by the way!

BO007ND · Jan 13th, 2004, 09:46 PM

Well,I was going to add on more stuff like whait his button/computer thing said on its screen and the shaken not stirred line but i forgot...yea,2000 was a little extreme but im new the Bond fiction,so you cant blame me. But atleast that means that the lab will be a hellofa lot bigger!

lol

Cigar Girl · Jan 14th, 2004, 03:28 AM

not bad. just tie everything in better and you'll be fine. glad someone is finally writing a fan fic. like Thuffner said, 2,000 nukes is a lot, but they could've taken them from Soviet stockpiles and nobody would've noticed, ha. keep up the good work and welcome to the board.

BO007ND · Jan 14th, 2004, 08:51 AM

Chaptrer 2: Death and Distruction

ENT. Korean Terminal, Seole, Korea

The helicopter lands in the center of a shiny, white tiled room with lots of people
Jessica now has an overcoat on.
Jessica and James head for the door and exit, but are quickly ambushed by men in leather with gas masks and silver pistols.
Bond (To Jessica): Get behind me.

Jessica does as asked and runs back into the building.
Bond puts on a bulletproof vest and helmet on and attacks the crowd with flying kicks and punches. After the huge fight is over, Jessica slowly walks out of the Terminal as Bond steals pistols off of a dead ambusher.
She is about to talk but four of the ambushers walk out of hiding, two grip her arms and the other two point pistols at her.

James trains his guns on the people as they walk off but another person, hiding behind a car, puts a knife to James’ heart

Man: Drop the guns.

Bond hesitates, thus being stabbed below the heart; he winces in pain, but pulls out the knife and kicks the man into a nearby car and stabs him diagonally in the left lung, instantly killing him. After the man is dead, Bond looks for Jessica, but she is nowhere to be found.
Bond: Damn It.

Bond looks up at the sky and sees a helicopter in the distance, then looks at a dark red and black motorcycle and smiles.

ENT. Highway

Bond, wearing night-vision goggles, zooms down the highway, narrowly avoiding cars, following the copter.

ENT. Inside Helicopter

Jessica struggles, tapped to the passenger seat right by a man whose frontal face is completely made of red jewels.
The man has a voice that sound half-mechanical.
Jewel Faced Man: You’ll quite like what I will do to you.

The man smirks.

One of Jessica’s captors approaches the jewel-faced man.

Captor #1: We got company, Sir.
Jewel-Face: Then kill him!!!
Captor #1: How?
Jewel-Face: Oh Hell! Let me!

ENT. Outside Helicopter

The Helicopter turns around and fires madly at the streets below.

ENT. Highway

Bond dodges all the shots and fires back with a mini-rocket launcher, while people run away screaming trying not to get killed by the shots.

After a few shots one of the missiles hits the copter, sending it hurtling into the city.

Cigar Girl · Jan 16th, 2004, 12:06 AM

good chapter, but i noticed a couple things...

Quote:

Originally Posted by BO007ND

Jessica and James head for the door and exit, but are quickly ambushed by men in leather with gas masks and silver pistols.
Bond (To Jessica): Get behind me.

Jessica does as asked and runs back into the building.
Bond puts on a bulletproof vest and helmet on and attacks the crowd with flying kicks and punches.

how does Bond have time to put on a bullet proof vest and helmet if he's getting ambushed?

Quote:

Originally Posted by BO007ND

Bond dodges all the shots and fires back with a mini-rocket launcher, while people run away screaming trying not to get killed by the shots.

After a few shots one of the missiles hits the copter, sending it hurtling into the city.

maybe it's me, it just seems pretty uncharacteristic of Bond to try and shoot down a helicopter when he knows the girl is inside.

keep up the good work though.

BO007ND · Jan 17th, 2004, 02:17 PM

Well,I'v only seen Live andLet Die and Die Another Day,so I dont really know that much about Bond's characteristics. And I guess Bond has super fast reflexes.

Its a three day weekend so maybe i'll write part three and post it by Tuesday.

Cigar Girl · Jan 17th, 2004, 03:24 PM

ha alright, sounds good.

Cigar Girl · Feb 12th, 2004, 11:05 PM

what happened to your fan fics?

Jan 14th, 2004, 03:28 AM	#4
Cigar Girl I Go Out With A Bang Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The World Is Not Enough Posts: 1,411 Gameroom Cash: $250	not bad. just tie everything in better and you'll be fine. glad someone is finally writing a fan fic. like Thuffner said, 2,000 nukes is a lot, but they could've taken them from Soviet stockpiles and nobody would've noticed, ha. keep up the good work and welcome to the board. __________________ JULIETTA THE Cigar Girl ...Still Smokin'...

Jan 17th, 2004, 03:24 PM	#8
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Jan 13th, 2004, 08:55 AM	#1
BO007ND Spy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11 Gameroom Cash: $250	First Bond fanfic.... This is the first chapter of my very first Bond fic,so be easy on me,lol. James Bond 007: Jewel Face Chapter 1: The London Encounter ENT. Nightclub, London, England James Bond sits at a table in front of a stage with ten or fifteen dancing girls in Vegas style costumes. James Bond (to a waitress): One Martini, please Waitress: Coming right up, Sir! A few minutes later James starts to take a sip out of his martini when the lights go out…. just seconds later they are illuminated by M-16s firing in every direction. He quickly pushes over his table and starts firing back with Automatic Uzis that he concealed under his tux. The thugs drop like flies after a minute or so and the lights turn back on. James sees a thug with a Swiss army knife against a dancers neck going upstairs. Yet, James doesn’t follow the thug, instead he throws a gas pellet at the stage and dashes outside to the roof were he sees a helicopter parked with its propeller spinning. He places his night vision goggles on and sees a pilot inside. He quickly crashes through the glass door and kills the pilot with his bear hands. James hides in the back of the copter until the man arrives with the showgirl just minutes later. After a few seconds there is a rain of gunfire between the two men. The woman screams and heads for the demolished door only to be grabbed by the neck by the thug back into the helicopter. The thug is killed and Bond and his new Bond Girl meet for the first time. Women: My God, are you crazy?!?! You could have killed us both! Bond: If I didn’t, you would have died a lot sooner. Women: Who are you, anyway? Bond: The name is Bond…James Bond Women: What the Hell are you doing here? Bond: I was here for leisure…but since the ambush, I’m on another mission. Women: You’re an agent? Bond: Yes. What is your name? Women: Jessica Malta, I work for the CIA . As they continue to talk, they hear a cell phone ring. Bond picks it up and puts a small microphone to his mouth, when he talks into the phone his voice is much deeper, like the Pilot’s was. Bond: Hello? Voice: This is Jewel Tech speaking, what’s delaying your flight? As the voice says ‘Jewel Tech’ Bond puts a button on his coat onto the phone, then hangs up. He opens up the button and it has the street address, country, and city typed on a little screen. Jessica: Jewel Tech…it rings a bell- Oh my God! Bond (with normal voice): What? Jewel Technologies is a computer company, but the CIA thinks that it is also holder of over 2,000 nuclear missiles! Bond sits in the cockpit and puts a fat orange key in the ignition, starting the copter. Bond: Then were going to Korea. Bond says while lifting the copter into the night sky.

Jan 13th, 2004, 09:46 PM	#3
BO007ND Spy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11 Gameroom Cash: $250	Well,I was going to add on more stuff like whait his button/computer thing said on its screen and the shaken not stirred line but i forgot...yea,2000 was a little extreme but im new the Bond fiction,so you cant blame me. But atleast that means that the lab will be a hellofa lot bigger! lol

Jan 14th, 2004, 08:51 AM	#5
BO007ND Spy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11 Gameroom Cash: $250	Chaptrer 2: Death and Distruction ENT. Korean Terminal, Seole, Korea The helicopter lands in the center of a shiny, white tiled room with lots of people Jessica now has an overcoat on. Jessica and James head for the door and exit, but are quickly ambushed by men in leather with gas masks and silver pistols. Bond (To Jessica): Get behind me. Jessica does as asked and runs back into the building. Bond puts on a bulletproof vest and helmet on and attacks the crowd with flying kicks and punches. After the huge fight is over, Jessica slowly walks out of the Terminal as Bond steals pistols off of a dead ambusher. She is about to talk but four of the ambushers walk out of hiding, two grip her arms and the other two point pistols at her. James trains his guns on the people as they walk off but another person, hiding behind a car, puts a knife to James’ heart Man: Drop the guns. Bond hesitates, thus being stabbed below the heart; he winces in pain, but pulls out the knife and kicks the man into a nearby car and stabs him diagonally in the left lung, instantly killing him. After the man is dead, Bond looks for Jessica, but she is nowhere to be found. Bond: Damn It. Bond looks up at the sky and sees a helicopter in the distance, then looks at a dark red and black motorcycle and smiles. ENT. Highway Bond, wearing night-vision goggles, zooms down the highway, narrowly avoiding cars, following the copter. ENT. Inside Helicopter Jessica struggles, tapped to the passenger seat right by a man whose frontal face is completely made of red jewels. The man has a voice that sound half-mechanical. Jewel Faced Man: You’ll quite like what I will do to you. The man smirks. One of Jessica’s captors approaches the jewel-faced man. Captor #1: We got company, Sir. Jewel-Face: Then kill him!!! Captor #1: How? Jewel-Face: Oh Hell! Let me! ENT. Outside Helicopter The Helicopter turns around and fires madly at the streets below. ENT. Highway Bond dodges all the shots and fires back with a mini-rocket launcher, while people run away screaming trying not to get killed by the shots. After a few shots one of the missiles hits the copter, sending it hurtling into the city.

Jan 17th, 2004, 02:17 PM	#7
BO007ND Spy Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11 Gameroom Cash: $250	Well,I'v only seen Live andLet Die and Die Another Day,so I dont really know that much about Bond's characteristics. And I guess Bond has super fast reflexes. Its a three day weekend so maybe i'll write part three and post it by Tuesday.